A slow and peaceful song about a silent bar.. and I know, too much echo... and remember to listen the end of the song, that´s when it grows.. that´s it, hope you like it even a little


Silent bar
by Miona


There´s a silent bar in the corner next to my place
where no one cares to visit
no music to listen
Only the owner breaths the air with no smoke
the only move he sees is when the leaves fall

Every night I hear him singing
singing the same song
about his lover who died in his arms
there was no time to say goodbye
or even give her the last kiss that night

huuu…

No one really knows what happened to him
actually no one cares
even where he´s been
the only thing that´s left is sign on a door
it says “I won´t be back afternoon”
Afternoon, afternoon, hey

Only the owner breaths the air with no smoke
all the things he said on the doorway
hey

Only the owner breaths the air with no smoke
all the things he said on the doorway
yeah, wow, yeah…

ha duu ha duu, uuu…

all i can say is wow...w8 there's more so first i hav 2 ask is, recording studio?  then...wat a beautiful voice its quite refreshing actually listening to some of this stuff on here... anyways...if u don't mind this ones going on my Ipod 4 school the lyrics fit well with the melody and not too much echo from wat i hear...is it you playin guitar or some1 else?

This songs works very well but the ONLY thing i would personally change would b a climax in the song with drums and a little distorted guitar ...not that i could do much better

What here to tell? I am subdued by your voice and hearing, really WOW.

Great great voice and nice harmony. Seems very soft to me but thats just a production thing I guess, the sound quality is good otherwise. Could benefit from some piano maybe?

beautiful.....


i love your work......

i'd prefer more climax tho

Great Voice 
I liked the song too
But a little more instruments would be better

Have to agree with all that this is a very nice song.

I had to turn up my volume button to hear it though.

Not so much of a comment than an observation : though you have a beautiful singing voice, with no audible accent, as a lyric writer myself I find the grammar of your lyrics a little difficult to follow.

Once again you have beautiful voice and it has so many interesting details. You can express so different moods with your voice that it should not restrict your future songs in any way. You can do just the music you like and it will work. Guitar is also played very well. Your choice of an ending works quite well here... it takes out the need to do any clear structured end which could ruin this overall dreamy and sad remembering feeling.

Somehow this has too low levels compared to other songs so fiddling with volume knob was necessary, and I'm lazy so it took 1% out of your overall score. =)

great skills on voice. I would put the ending somewhere in the middle of the song. And then some drums set in but thats only in my mind....

good work

Very nice song and vocals!
I love the accent, reminds me to Bjork
Yeah your singing is really good, the vocals are a bit compressed, should be brighter in my view

Nice song and nice melody...keep up the good work