Since rych still ows me lyrics and i got stuck on this demo for months

give it a go mate

Greetings
 Wissie

It's a song waiting for lyrics, but is that all it's waiting for?

It's nice for about a minute, has a good theme, but the repetition starts to really drone. More variation on the keyboard rhythm would really improve this. It's got a good upbeat feel, but by the end it just feels beat, at least to me. Overall, good potential and worth developing, but not yet there. Maybe that is the intention, since you don't have your lyrics yet?

This is cool... nice reggae feel. As I told you before, I don't care much for the repetition if te beat is good enough. And this is.  The thing is that I'm not feeling you made the right choice of sounds... ok, it doesn't have to be all "organic" sounds but that lead is too... plastic for the song in my opinion, and the Ah's on the intro give me the same tought.

If you could fix that, add lyrics and a decent outro you'll be there

good luck.

EDIT: I'm not rating this one because I asume it's just an early stage so i'm looking forward for a new version 

Thanx for the comments guys

Yes this song still needs a lot of improvements..

the only problem is...i have like 5 different version on this "basic idea" but none of them aren't as catchy as i want it to sound.

Any ideas or help would be great!

Greetings!
Wisdom