lovely guitar...vocals are good - wish I could understand what you're saying though really like how the drums and bass come in...sounds like a natural progression...a well constructed song...interesting changes...makes me want to listen again...the lead guitar at 1:34 is perhaps a tiny bit too loud..but other than that, I think you've done a good job with this.
Sorry, I'm not going to write a whole review! I just like it!
Great start, but it trails off a bit towards the end. I would suggest bringing the last verse in a bit earlier (say at 2:30 rather than 2:39) and pushing for some sort of high point near the end of the verse.
Some of the bass line is very odd harmonically, but I think it just about works.
Otherwise excellent!
Some of the bass line is very odd harmonically, but I think it just about works.
Otherwise excellent!
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