ok first of all special thnx to my man RAZOR.................... ths song was actually composed while he was teachin me Fl studio and we ended up with ths cool song its kinda touchin song..............but its cool wht i felt .............

again thnx to ma man RAZOR..............

what can I say, this is very well done... I love that drum track.

The only thing is that everything kind of happens at the precise momment it's expected to happen... it's a bit predictable, so if you could add the "suprise element" in there you would make it a lot more interesting.

Keep on working.

Well done to you both, this is a live tutorial able to stand up on its own two feet.

I must indeed agree here too, that drum beat of yours is thumpin'

Beat indeed,you got a really sweet build with this one ,1.37  sould be able to extend and develop this piece ....nice work 

this is a good song...just to short  which means  ya cant get enough of this song...real good recording...nice flow...

Flyer

Again, from a drummers point of view...the techno drum beat ROCKS. It fits well with the gothic rhythm of the keys.  Now you need some scarrrrrrrrrrrry vox to fill it all in.  keep up the great work.

niiice work, very VNV nation

a bit too short to put vocals to... overall sounds really good though

the beat is great, the keys sounds really fit whats going on. I notice a lot of  FL stuff just has alot of "just whatever" in it. This actually works well. I wished you had more, and more parts. I could sing my  #@$   off to something like this.