This composition - abstraction. As ideas of the person which skip with one on another, but there is one idea always. It is persuasive and at times paranoid. Only something has added, and something has removed.

Hey, bro'! That's wonderful piece.I like it very much I'm the same like you- I've got so undone projects. :)and skipping to another Bye now!

-=ReFlex=-

sounds very good - very relaxing actually, definately not what I'd associate with paranoia! it's hypnotic though, and a typical techno style I'd associate with certain computer games.

I like to have this sort of stuff on when I'm typing things... concentration on iffy math problems... reading in on science papers... etc... so, well done!

sounds good

I like some of the sounds and the percussion . not bad for this genre.

The keys create an nice tension in the intro and when the drums come in everything fills out nicely. Nice sound. I would echo the sentiment that I don't get much of a sense of paranoia from this piece but, title aside, it's a nice laid back soundscape with some nice dark themes which is quite enjoyable to listen to. Overall , it doesn't really grab the attention but it's nice background music I think.

I like the the drum loop you used for the build.  I hear a couple of different songs in here though.  You should strongly consider seperating the first and second half and building on them individually.  Good to have someone from a relative genre chiming in.  Good stuff!

I added some guitars on this song. I hope it's ok.
You can find it here