This is my latest recording. It's Techno/Pop/Rock. Not my best work, but hey. I used a built in loop make on my key board for the drums.

ENJOY!!!!!!!!


PS. I will post the 2ND version later.

hmmmmmmm, well personally I think you have allot of good ideas....however I don't think what you hear in your head is exactly what your transferring......You need to work on constructing a song......First I would suggest listening to your favorite artists and see how they are constructing and what aspects of that you could use in your recordings...also I think you should practice playing over a metronome.....start off with simple and slow and work yourself up...So ya some good ideas here just need some practice...If you listen to this from an un biased approach you will hear that there's allot going on but none of it is doing it together..

Keep at it...I can hear the endless possibilities for ya...

I'll try that! I might break it up into about 4 sections, verse-Chorus-outro.

Thanxs!!!

-Daniel

I've downloaded this one, I like whats happening in that break of yours.

As for advice, here's some, listen to PX.

As for some more good advice, keep on rockin'...practicing takes time...enjoy it!