This is the first song I successfully recorded at home. Not the best recording but I enjoyed the process.  Lyrics are a bit sad but oh well.

Beautiful!

You have potentially, don't be afraid to push your voice, I think there's alot more there.

Yeah express your voice more. Its a very decent voice. You also might wanna pull back a hair from the mic. I can hear breaths every now and then.
Altogether its a very good song! Keep it up.

Awesome. I love it. Do more. Lots more. I'll buy it from you. I would take Nunly's advice, work on your production a bit and it could be a 10.

great song, very good voice man, keep it coming please

Very good melody... I find this song is beautiful!

Yes good song, needs more time recording it with more care. I Like it!!!!

I guess everybody's said it....needs better audio quality, but a GREAT tune..and the performance ability is definately there.

Great song sort of old Bob Dylanish.

Not so dylanish but very Brassens-ish...

It sounds familier. And thats in the first few seconds. Good mix, and tone. But I just keep thinking I've heard it before. Kinda Fleetwood Mac ...  ish.
Good song though.

Very nicely done.  You did well for your equipment.  It sounds wonderful and full of feeling.  Keep at it; you will do great.

Fluent playing and singing from the beginning thru the end.  Good work.

I have listened to all your stuff and agree with every one who ses you are talented. As some one already said, don't be afraid to push your voice a bit further, its better than I feel you think. That's the feeling I get from your songs sometimes. Sorry if I have got it wrong.
I thoroughly look forward to hearing more of your songs.