what do you think please be honest !
enjoy


Peace

Well ...

actually this is NOT the work of two month

it is another jam, as all of our work so far.

we just wanted to know what people think about it as a proper song,

because we think it has some really nice ideas which could be used for a

proper song.

We still like to know what you think about it

peace


Our work so far:



Estråtomijk        :    http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3677.html
Squarling          :    http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3657.html
Dansk Möbler       :    http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3676.html
Årbet en Marketsk  :   http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3678.html

She F''n hates me................

Your German accent is quite good.

For a jam this is alright, it sounds pertty disjointed to me though. I think the guitar playing in general needs alot of improvement. I like the intro, but I think you should work on tightening up the rythym work between the guitar and drummer, and that will really improve this track.

needs some more work you need to tighten up your playing some when recording timing is very improtant. I'm sure you can hear this though.