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#1November 16th, 2006 · 07:57 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
12 posts
Finland
Just a game
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This is the placeholder for a new MP3 player

This song is not in a battle


And then next one...and with a band. This is only a demo that I made with my fellow students, and it still needs little work. My lyrics and melody.....well no more buts, here it is.. little more rock


Just a game
by Miona

I canīt decide (I canīt decide)
I canīt decide what road to take
Should I forget the date we had when you wrote our names in the sand
I canīt fight (I canīt fight)
I canīt fight against these tears
When you wrote me a letter why I wasnīt the girl you dreamed at night

Was it love or just a game?
these kind of things makes me feel like insane
come on, come on, let me try
my hopes wonīt harm you, right?
What if I got another chance
would I take it and find romance?
Hey, Hey, let/hear me say
I miss you today

Chorus:    Did you close your eyes when you kissed me?
    Did you rise above?
    And I taught that you missed me
    when I was gone
    I was wrong...

I just can lie ( I just can lie)
I just can lie here no more
Iīve been here īfore after when I caught you with another in my bed

Was it love or just a cruise?
these kind of things makes me feel like a fool
come on, come on, tell me the truth
are you fascinated by the youth?

2xChorus:

4x I was wrong...

2xChorus:

3x I was wrong...

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#2November 16th, 2006 · 11:15 AM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
lol, sounds like teen punk rock, nicely executed. I like the chord progression of the chorus, mainly, and the way it is played. I can hear there's a great guitar tone in there, but the entire mixing is a bit off - this surely deserves some more attention yeah. The drum sounds muffled, missing high mid and high eq, can barely hear the cymbals, and too dominating in the lows. It seems only the voice has sufficient high mid and high frequencies, could be more to the front, and if the guitars can be eq'd sharper so they stand out more... hmm.. a lot of things really.... if it were possible I'd love to mix the tune for you... BUT - all in all I like it - nice demo, gets the feeling and idea across well enough, it's a tight construction and your voice is really good. Excellent drive, it's been playing in a loop for some time now and it keeps getting better and better... So, keep it up, I guess

ps. it's "decide"
#3November 16th, 2006 · 12:59 PM
9 threads
75 posts
United States of America
Hey!
I tink it is f****** awesome!
#4November 16th, 2006 · 02:52 PM
3 posts
United States of America
its ko0
#5November 16th, 2006 · 03:17 PM
3 posts
United States of America
nice song
#6November 16th, 2006 · 11:22 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
cookies
i love the vox man this is great, i agree with puppets post but man this is awsome good job. i cant get over those vox..wow this song kinda remindes me of a relationship. whitch is GOOD songs are ment to tuch others you guys hit the nail on the head man, so i aword you a cookie! thats the first cookie ive given in at least a month

paperdoll
#7November 17th, 2006 · 01:39 PM
10 posts
United Kingdom
i really liked that song! its mint! WICKED!         
#8November 17th, 2006 · 01:48 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
7 posts
Romania
good voice for ROCK!!!
 
#9November 17th, 2006 · 04:14 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
Nice job!  Good to hear you singing with a band...overall, I like the song...it's well constructed...the playing is tight, your vox are strong...I agree with Puppet that the mix is off, and my only other suggestion would be to get those back-up vox/harmonies in tune a little more (but that's just a personal preference...alot of this type of music has discordant sounds)
#10November 18th, 2006 · 09:05 AM
66 threads / 66 songs
153 posts
Italy
i've strange feeling with the vocals, remind me grace slick from jefferson airplane... 
#11November 18th, 2006 · 02:01 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
I like this song a lot.

I love the harmonies

It's a good funky punky place to bop.
#12November 18th, 2006 · 02:34 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
hi
this is a nice Rocker...you have the voice for it also...nice harmonies ..there seems to be a slight timing issue around 1:00, 1:40? and 2:40? or is it me ?

Flyer
#13November 19th, 2006 · 11:52 AM
8 threads / 8 songs
127 posts
Bulgaria
Oh,If I could make a song like this...I would be very happy:) I always knew - there are many interesting crazy people(in a good meaning) in  Finland.! Super-song. your voice reminds me of Pink. It's angry and catching!
#14November 28th, 2006 · 11:15 PM
26 threads / 26 songs
96 posts
Russia
Very much impresses. And it is possible still?
#15December 13th, 2006 · 03:00 AM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
cool song. good quality.

the style is not my personal preference... but this is extremely well done.

mix could use some work. well, at least the drums. hard to hear. no presence. no punch.

but, sounds like a tight band. keep it up.
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