The beginning of a new song. It's not short, but it's only the intro.
I'm not so patient to finish it and then show it.
But surely I'll finish it, when I got time.
Thanks.

evocative!

Starts out pretty good, hopefully you'll finish it.

Interesting, needs more bitter !

Till 0:09 this is so cool. Reminds me of some tunes of "Tool", especially "Die Eier von Satan", where they have this huge bass riff over spoken vocals like you have. This definitely is worth a try.
After that Twang, its too random. especially the violin-y-thing doesnt fit the rest of the Dark mood.

That is because I want a mystic oriental feeling, also dark, but i don't want anything fast or heavy. Maybe I'll keep with the cello and the bass.
Thanks.

this has the beginnings of something cool, but then it never goes anywhere! Maybe you should wait till you finish the song before posting!

It sounds good, but it's like watching a trailer, never know if the film is going to be good.
Should you get a bit of patience...

This is a good start.
Could be a nice song, I think. 
I really like the mystic...

Do you play the Cello, or is it a keyboard or something?

interesting