Well.. i vrote this song one year ago to I guy called johan. although he broke my heart. haha. how sad.
but the song is well.. kind of boring actually. I like it sometimes and sometimes I dont. though.. listen to it and realx cuase you're the only one I adore!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
Yer not my sort of music.
But; nice, obviously would have sounded better played on an immensely expensive grand piano piano of some sort but I'm guessing you don't have one of those lying around.
Err, Your voice wavers sometimes, did you sing at the same time as playing the keyboard?
All in all, I like the electronic beats and you have a nice voice but I can't stop myself from saying it's slightly cliched. But so's all of my stuff. So...
If you want to finish this song of to perfection I'd advise re-recording the vocals, other than that, good.
It was really well mixed and eq'd, did you do it your self?

this is really nice...you have a very nice voice... nice recording also..
love the piano you play for this song..Ima sucker for piano..lol
well you sing like you have been touched by a angel...nice

Flyer

you have potential...overall...a fairly decently constructed song, the piano is a little loud in the mix compared to the vocals...and..I do think you have the makings of a great voice, but you sound hesitant in your singing - nervousness can make your voice waver off key like Moses mentioned.  Work on singing with confidence, sing like you MEAN it..with passion and emotion.

Can't wait to hear some more from you 

fresh and lively. though not my kind of music. jack

Adore...who? me?..O.thank you.

Note to MOSES ; It's a Girly song, don't you get it? 

As it is now it's not my style, but as spoon said with some more 'mean it' and 'balls' !!! and maybe some more live instruments he might get the message.

very well done

ive listened to this about 10 times

your voc is in tune all the time........
but it lacks enthusiasm of your piano player

a bit of fire?

splash vote warm

80%

u sound scared of the mike

nice

i LOVE your voice! great vox man and i love the piano i agree with flyer im a sucker for piano as well great jobn and im gonna go check out more of your stuff now welcome to the amp and i hope you have fun!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lots of potential.

Not my style.... naturally... but it's a cool song.

Probably the biggest thing that could make this 100 times better is if you sang out more.

Got any more? Keep em coming.