Did the guitar and vocals together then added the piano track later. Another upbeat ballad.

Pleasant song. Nice descending guitar and vocal line. It seems like the tempo picks up a bit during the "louder" part (2:15).  If that's what you're trying to do, I'd rush it a bit more (for contrast). This would probably be a nice effect since it calms back down right away.  If it's not what you're trying to do, I'd be careful to maintain the tempo.

The length of the song is about right, too.  Good judgment.

Check the popped "B" in "I wanna be where you are" (2:50)

You've got a good voice, and I enjoyed hearing this well-written, well-performed song that could be pulled off by one person live.  I'd love to hear what else you have that takes on deeper lyrical topics.

Thanks for posting, and keep 'em coming!

Yes very nice..Im hearing some sort of "wind" instrument taking solo...very nice vibe and mood..

I LOVE THIS

very good vocals. would need a cello in the back supporting the harmony. jack

I love to listen such music....
Great vocals. Go with a band. I can hear some drums and a bass and more piano. And a second voice in the chorus. Perhaps a female voice?

Great song. Thanks for uploading

Yes this is a beautiful song,

Well made, well played.

This is a very pretty song. Smells of the 60-70s but that's on the positive side! Rated it high!
The guitar and the vocals have been recorded almost spotlessly - possibly some equalisation would make the sound fuller, but I dont' see any urgent need to treat the song with that or compression (well, maybe a little bit)
Love it - very natural sound
Jim

this song is really good! i like both your songs! i would definatly buy your cds if you release some