Well, what could I say to defend myself. As always, it´s not ready yet, but here it is - my first recording. I usually play with a band, but this one is acoustic. Try to enjoy ( and the real me comes up in the end of the song).

PAPERBACK NOVEL
by Miona


I´m staying up through the night
rolling from side to side
the darkness without a light
has made me colour-blind
The toughts in my head
won´t leave me alone
I´ll close my eyes and die in bed
And nobody knows why

Chorus:    There has been times I didn´t know the reason why
    Why should I go on, how?
    Why not let go now?
    There has been times I felt nothing inside
    No power to keep alive
    Oh, why?

Have you ever tried to throw
paperback novel against the wall
and see what page comes up
when it hits the ground, covers down?
I did, It was an act of rage
but I got eclipse from the page
it told a story about my life
and how it could be

2xChorus:

Yeah, Yeah…
Wow Yeah

2xChorus:

Hey yeah

A very nice song to introduce yourself with.  Lovely vox...especially when you really put some power into them near the end 

Just a suggestion...sand it's about english language....in the chorus - you should say "have" instead of "has" and some other english spelling errors:
"rowling" should be "rolling"
"taughts" should be "thoughts"

But I like it!  Can't wait to hear more from you 

Is there more that you would like to show up?
Sounds fresh. Id like to hear the band version.
Youre a great singer. I feel good while listening.
And I like the sound of the metronome.
The song as itself  is very good. The performance is very good
The quality is good. I like the echo effect on the vocals.
I dont like the bass. IMO its bit too dry.
But you got a vote. Waiting for more.

I really like your voice, and the whole song too...perfect tune for a warm voice 

gretat song well done acoustic......................sure would like 2 hear u with band
i vote 86% .....................needs the band to make this song jump out but its still hot
splash
the fish
 

What a lovely powerful voice...very nice.Personally I like the song without a band...more intimate and personal vibe.Excellent job.

Great Vocals!!   I think the songs sounds really good!
Keep them coming.... nice to listen to!

Welcome to the AMP!  

-NT4M

I agree with all of the above.. pretty much...   Lovely voice... Great guitar work....   This is a lovely song.. and a great one to introduce yourself...   Can't wait to hear many more!

             JimK

wow real good stuff... love your voice!

cant wait to hear moore

definately very good! can't add to what's been said.. I think it's very well done for your first recording. Even without drums there is a strong energetic drive coming through - simply great!

as all said: pretty good voice, nice recording and welcome to the amp

I can't wait to hear more from you, simply I love it

Dodo

amazing voice, it came across.
pleased to meet you

rod

Just passing by to have a listen.... so sad you don't upload music anymore....

I liked the song. I think you have a strong voice. Are you planning to fill the music in with more instruments? I keep on hearing electric guitar and stuff with it for build up. If you'd like we can collaborate?