well jus another song wanted to do something with FL studio to learn it and made something whih i think would be.....
good

You got a nice tune/melody going on in there
I like it
O its just become more
Like it more
Keep it up

Helo, this is a pretty good effort, if your only learning. i know you say you like hip hop, so i can understand the beat youve used, but i cant hlp thinking that the tune would be better with less of an emphasis on the beats.
good work.