again i don't knw why did i named it ths but whtever comes to my mind i jus put it in my song and i have no  idea wht was i thinking whn i made ths..................lolzzz............jus a begeinner's song so rate wisely

Again, your lead sounds to me a bit "left alone" against the rest of the parts... try to accomplish a more organic/dynamic sound and I'll be voting high 

I like the atmospheric sounding of your instruments, it sounds intence .

Try to do a bit more with the song though, like aetheris already said, so it will sound more lively,

keep up the good work 

greetz

RazoR