Your just an other
sun stained white teenager
in suburbia
you dye your hair
to be different from others
but i see your all exactly the same

i didn't think of the effects
that you would have one me
one minute I'm alright
the next i cant not breathe
i smell your sent on my clothes
and its suffocating me
it looks like i was wrong

When I said
hello to you
all I did was follow through
ain't that what I'm supposed to do

oh my god
what the fuck did i do to you
its not my fault that your confused
it looks like were different hues

solo thing

just because I'm not an asshole
means you need to sleep with the guy who is
so when did being your self become a crime
because god dammit
I'm guilty as charged

Days come and go
and I'm drifting in and out
when i think I'm expanding my mind
I'm just killing it all off
i know you like to drown
your woes with alcohol
its so easy to get caught up in the doubt

of living in your past
love cant be with out your half
am i a disgrace to you

its too bad I'm a hypocrite
when love is the other way
is it me who's the asshole

i set my self up toady
i should have know you wouldn't stay
i was looking for love today
i should have know you would betray

were all blood and flesh
and to the earth we'll go back
such a short time to laugh

You have a great voice! The music is sooooo slow and off , that it drives your vocals way down. I like the song alot, I really do, the instrumentation is just not there yet. You definetly have something here I want to listen to again!

sounds like you're off to a good start...sometimes singing offkey can work...but I think I'd like to hear you singing on key more often than not     It also sounds like the guitars are out of tune.  Your vocals also seem to be a little too forward in the mix...but these are all things you can work on - so good luck!