we got lost one day on the road
and we don't know where to go
just you and me
smoking all the trees
are painted like fall
and i don't care if i go home

conversation hasn't ran dry
ideas like leaves are falling by
this town has a ceiling were sick of it
we just wanna get out
and see other places
make a home somewhere else

were stuck in an apple Field
the cold rotted the fruit is real
we got sweaters and hats
and when we breathe it looks like smoke
were just hot blooded in the cold

were as high as the ceiling of this town
provided to us by circumstance
we think of a plan to escape
but the mud is too thick

then the rain beings to fall
and the land traps us in
locked in our positions
i don't want to stay like this forever
compromising all we have
just so i can get out
you got to fend for your self
cause in the end i only got my self

things get a lot screechy, there's a lot of noise. think its the recording.  i guess you go out in the vocals but the lyrics fit in good with the music. the drums need to be tuned.........construction of the song, i like.

Great potential a bit flat on the vocal pitch but awesome song,very original sounding.Can't believe you only got one review on this!!
Good job with this song,any chance of a redo!

this is pretty good ..some of the vocal lines seem off a bit but from what i know about this genre of music that's fairly common and  may be done on purpose... it's fits right into the indie stuff going on .