time to wake up and go to work
i brush my teeth and grab my hat
just because I'm not too excited
donut mean I'm not trying to survive

6 am the day has started
the consumers they line   in file
I'm just filling up there coffee
i am there just to waste the time

there's a judgde in a court and a man
pleading for his life

there's a always a mall
full of kids board with life

and time goes by

I'm out of work and i am hungry
i pull into next drive thru place
its a girl my age that takes my order
she looks like shes wasting her time

I ask what are you doing all this for
a girl like you could reach the stars
she made smile and said her daughter
shes gonna grow up better than her mother

life is always better
when your stoned 

i am only 18
Ive lived allot of life

but I'm still a child

solo

i make it home i but am tried
i grab the guitar and sing all night
one day ill be a famous writer
maybe then i wont be wasting my time

i wish i wasn't so lonely
chasing dreams that never come true
its like I'm stuck in attic or a cellar
its home i have a hard time getting to

the world feels so heavy
when your young

will tomorrow be the same
or will i change

only time will tell

I like it!

     Really cool!   The quality of the recording isn't super.. but it isn't bad... I think the vocals need some cleaning up(hissing in the background) and then a touch of reverb to make them really fill out... perhaps some slight stereo delay as well might add to the whole thing and make it really feel warm....
  
     I do, I say, I surely do like it!

          Welcome to the Amp!

                     JimK

its great keep i tup

Amusing song. In Kazakhstan there is such concept - akyn. It means - that now I see, I sing.

I don't know what msi means in your name, I'm hoping Mindless Self Indulgence, but your style is very different from theirs, anyway, nice lyrics and good instrumentals to go with the vocals, maybe you should try some filters

In my youth (like when i was 11 or 12) I was addicted to mindless self indulgence, so I made this handle msi435... and it has stuck with me ever since. I hate there new shit a lot... but they still put on a good show.

thanks for your comment. Man this song is awesome, the lyrics are very good and the end keeps you thinking. the guitar fits in really well. cya later

woke up got outa bed dragged a comb scross ma head . totally real mate  sweet . 

Nice, "A day in the life" by the Beatles! I'm not sure what that has to do with my song though...

 I believe it is in reference to this :

             time to wake up and go to work
i brush my teeth and grab my hat


   BTW,  would still like to hear this cleaned up...  better quality....   etc. etc....

                   JimK

wow really nice. vocals little off key in spots. but not badly.

nice simple little tune. good balance.

nice solo. short and simple. little timing blip in there.

I also like the lyrics.

and the ending! not quite sure why I like it so much..

anyway, got my vote.

Great tune!  Like just about everything...the way it moves along in it's simple groove is really sweet.  As was mentioned..your vox go off key...try some pitch training.  I do think that your voice has some nice qualities to it..so work on the pitch and you'll be great!

hmm, i'm writing as i listen...

this tune has a catchy thing, i'm moving my feet

the lyrics are great, a posmodern description of ... one day!

I know the record quality and all the blah,blah BUT all you have to do is re-do it and it's ready!,
keep in mind all the comments about it

I like the vox too, good melodies.

Dodo

Good job, I like the begaining.

very fresh and clean. like it! vocals are some point uncertain but overall is good! jack