the sweet sweet sound of an acoustic.... ruined by my terrible voice lol.

I kept listening..... I listened to the whole thing...
I couldn't hear the terrible vocals.... maybe you should re do it??
maybe put them in if you can........
other then that I thought this was good...
I think it could use something... I am not sure though...
I can't play a thing..... but I just can do vocals....I think I am ok
but aloy of people like my vocals.....

hmmm but I really think this is GOOD!! 
In my Opinion! 

-NT4M

and in my opinion its not ready to publish. Rerecord it please. Voice is ok.

I agree it is no where near the final copy of the song. lol im using a $15 dollar plastic Labtec Mircophone. Did any1 ever even hear of it haha?
and its pluggeg directly into the computer so it sounds like telephone quality. I jusr recorded ir yesterday too! And i just downloaded the recording software before that lol. I'm happy with it but thanks cuz i know if i wanna put it on a CD this is unacceptable.

Okay, the vocals are good but you need to give it a bass line and a drum track.
Also, the timing is a little off on the guitar.  If you use a drum track or some kind of meter
this will help.  I want to hear this again.  You might also consider some kind of bridge, intro, outro
that is different from the rest to mix it up a littlle.  This is a good start, though.
One more thing,  I noticed "pops" in the vocal recording.  Use a screen on your mic to prevent this.

I think if do these simple changes you will have something. - Mark from GRUNTLED



     

this is really good....  I like it...   The quality is bad, but you know that... and it is easy to get better quality with the gear you have...  I still use a cheap mic hooked into my computer sound card... no mixer, no expensive sound card, it is the built in sound card.. and my mic was buy one at $19.99 and get two free.... so I couldn't resist...

      So let me know if you have any questions...  send me a pm, and I will help you get some better quality rather quickly... 

              JimK

A nice song indeed.
You could easily get hold of a program for you pc to record or at least lay two tracks, ever heard of www.sonicspot.com?.
Record the vocals and the guitar separately, simple as a pimple.

  I think he did record them seperate, based on the sound of the guitar and vocals, and the editing that has been done...  

    Audacity is also a nice free program, and incredibly intuitive...  One of the easiest and best I have seen....

    http://audacity.sourceforge.net

                  JimK

kinda like the lyrics but i think you need to clean it up a smidgen alot of air in there

I think the vocals are alright...but you need to work on your guitar playing a little (timing and also the strength of your finger pressure playing chords).  One thing that could be affecting the guitar sound could be your guitar's action...it sounds like it is set way to high...check your acoustic for access to the truss rod and adjust it carefully to lower the action of your strings (but not so low that they're touching!).

Others have mentioned the recording issues, so I won't mention that.  But I think you've got a nice song here..so keep working at it! Good luck 

not bad

hey a good try but i think you got a bit too close to the mic
and hit it a few times the bain of playing too a mike  try and turn the recording up
and get a couple of inchs further away your voice is alright don't knock it

Voice isn't bad, but sure it could be improved.

Def needs to be re recorded imo.

Add a bit more dynamics too, and maybe a key change for the chorus. Or some ornamentation.

There's some problem about the rythm