This is one of my favorite works. Couldn't think of a name though. It someone can come up with something would be really appreciated.

"Miss condemed"?
cool song,
bit heavier than what i thought was your type of thing, but its good to hear some heavyness too.its a  bit jeff buckley-ish, thats not a bad thing btw.
i think when your first chorus comes in the volume is a bit too high, it made me jump a bit and turn my speakers down, but maybe thats what was meant to happen.

I like it

Rather interestingly.

I was waiting for an answer
From the girl that I gave my heart
But she never answered and I was torn apart
Was thr some confusion about the way that feel
Girl I will love you more than you need

Screaming and bleeding and pleading for Sunshine
Hoping and trying and dying for a new life
I have been condemned forever to miss u
For the sake of love we are bleassed with solitude.

I was waiting for ur answer
U r the girl tht broke my heart
But u never answered and I was torn apart
Thr is no confusion I believe its a mistake
You were meant for somebody else
I am the worng guy in wrong place

Screaming and bleeding...;

I'm a sucker for the Polynesian strum, semi reggae. Nice and cool, til the chorus. Then it gets all Adam Sandler in the wedding singer. You might wanna chill a bit more, considering it's all acoustic. Could work with a full band though.Light and shade and all that. A metronome wouldn't go astray. Keep it up though. Looking forward to more of your stuff. !

Cool

I like the song, nice lyrics to but you definitely need a compressor/limiter or something.
At 1:50 it get's just a little too loud.
it spoils the song a bit in my opinion.
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Thnk u all for the comments, I know I need to work on the volumes.

i am not being mean at all, because i know its hard to be successfull, but that chorus just makes me wanna jump off a cliff. Your voice is to loud.

so its called a polynesian strum. first time i heard it. now i see how important sites like bandamp are. i hear and learn some new things.

i liked it, except the chorus part, its cool, but you might consider turning the volume down a bit on that part. a little editing and it' be great.