It's fer' ma' Jen.

Warm breezes and cold winter nights
The stars above are shining bright
As the universe slowly unwinds
And shows us both the shining light

I feel connected to the sky
As I sing to you a lullaby
Love so strong it makes me cry
And happily ever after

A fairytale come to life
When we are together
The moral of this story is
That we are bound forever

I feel connected to the sky
As I sing to you a lullaby
Love so strong it makes me cry
And happily ever after

Sounds like that start of something good.  A shame about the recording...I'm having a hard time hearing your vox - but what I can hear sounds pretty good.  Did you record the vox and the guitar at the same time - onto the same track?

Yeah, I just recorded everything at once.  I may go back and record everything seperately so I can bump up the volume of the vocals.

it has loads of potential...

basically its a good song, with below average recording.

but i look forward to hearing the re-recording!

well the recording quality of the guiter is decent, you just need to sing louder or turn the vocals up.

but apart from that side of things, i think youve got a good song on your hands.
i think if you fingerpicked the first two and a half minutes of it and then started strumming, and repeated the last verse it might be better, just a thought.

nice song   the vocals do need to be bumped up as you know ....this is a good song....stay with it..will wait for the next version if you decide to kick up the vox

Flyer

Sounds like an  awesome song, too bad the recording is bad. The vocals need to be a little more pronounced thought

great song for driving

Fix the recording quality and you will get something really good out of this!
You could add some piano.
I like the guitar playing.

         > Iszil

yeah, i couldn't agree more with the other reptiles, oops, i meant replies...  

I like all of it...    I wish I could sing like that. Hmm...

This is so cute. Thats a really nice love song, youre playing.
Youre very good with the guitar. And your voice is lovely too. pershaps you should move a little bit closer to the microphone - its almost too quiet.

Awesome job. keep it up

peace