#1October 22nd, 2006 · 04:33 PM
3 threads / 3 songs
24 posts
United States of America
Happily Ever After
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It’s in the battle 2006-11


It's fer' ma' Jen.

Warm breezes and cold winter nights
The stars above are shining bright
As the universe slowly unwinds
And shows us both the shining light

I feel connected to the sky
As I sing to you a lullaby
Love so strong it makes me cry
And happily ever after

A fairytale come to life
When we are together
The moral of this story is
That we are bound forever

I feel connected to the sky
As I sing to you a lullaby
Love so strong it makes me cry
And happily ever after

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#2October 23rd, 2006 · 04:34 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
Sounds like that start of something good.  A shame about the recording...I'm having a hard time hearing your vox - but what I can hear sounds pretty good.  Did you record the vox and the guitar at the same time - onto the same track?
#3October 23rd, 2006 · 04:38 PM
3 threads / 3 songs
24 posts
United States of America
Yeah, I just recorded everything at once.  I may go back and record everything seperately so I can bump up the volume of the vocals.
#4October 24th, 2006 · 06:02 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
it has loads of potential...

basically its a good song, with below average recording.

but i look forward to hearing the re-recording!
#5October 25th, 2006 · 09:51 PM
25 threads / 22 songs
132 posts
Ireland
well the recording quality of the guiter is decent, you just need to sing louder or turn the vocals up.

but apart from that side of things, i think youve got a good song on your hands.
i think if you fingerpicked the first two and a half minutes of it and then started strumming, and repeated the last verse it might be better, just a thought.
#6October 29th, 2006 · 05:38 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
cool
nice song   the vocals do need to be bumped up as you know ....this is a good song....stay with it..will wait for the next version if you decide to kick up the vox

Flyer
#7November 10th, 2006 · 11:36 PM
31 posts
Canada
Sounds like an  awesome song, too bad the recording is bad. The vocals need to be a little more pronounced thought
#8November 18th, 2006 · 11:37 AM
3 posts
United States of America
good
great song for driving
#9November 18th, 2006 · 01:41 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,540 posts
Chile
Fix the recording quality and you will get something really good out of this!
You could add some piano.
I like the guitar playing.

         > Iszil
#10November 19th, 2006 · 03:07 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
38 posts
United States of America
in agreement
yeah, i couldn't agree more with the other reptiles, oops, i meant replies...  
#11November 22nd, 2006 · 09:03 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Beautiful...
I like all of it...    I wish I could sing like that. Hmm...
#12November 25th, 2006 · 01:13 PM
20 threads / 20 songs
62 posts
Denmark
This is so cute. Thats a really nice love song, youre playing.
Youre very good with the guitar. And your voice is lovely too. pershaps you should move a little bit closer to the microphone - its almost too quiet.

Awesome job. keep it up

peace
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