This song is a bit of silliness that resulted from me trying to learn how to play bass.

I apologize in advance for that fact that I apparently am under the impression that I can sing the way I tried to in this "song".

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THis is pretty silly....  That just means I like it even more...

            The vocals are... well.... umm.... unique??....  yeah, that's it.... Unique....


          And the mix is outta wack..... but that's ok.. the song is outta wack... hahahaha

                      JimK

well, well well, this is an interesting ... song! strongly reminds me of very early legendary pink dots, this includes silly lyrics subject, off mixing, bass line, and general soundscape of the song.

eh, outta wack, like jim said! hahaha

The bass line kinda sounds like an old video game theme song,but i dig the subject matter.

its very short isnt it?
i could listen to it repeated once more and not get bored, i like your voice.
the only annoying bit is the bass, its too much for the song, you could play less note on it and it would be just as good i think.
no need to apologise for your singing!
maybe the oh ohs are a bit out of tune, but the verses are pretty good.
i like this, i hope you do more like it, or make this one more complete.

A bit off key. The main vocals might have a little less reverb. I liked the lyrics (the part I could understand that is). It seems like a placebo version of Sounds of Silence. All in all a good song. That is atleast I liked it. Can u post the lyrics.

P.S> Can we have a little less bassy oh ohs.

I really like your vocals, they could be ever so slightly further back in the mix, but I just love the style and the feeling you create.
It is frustratingly short, I would have loved to have heard more.

Maybe you could keep the reverb on the vocals, keeping the 'tinny' effect but just lowering its volume a little?

Not bad!

Interesting...