A cool, groovy song our band wrote.

up volume please but the song is good

cool song!

And yeah i prefer it louder...and the vox sounds a bit tired in some parts.

there is lot of scope for improvement in this song.  you guys need to make things a lot more tight, making the loose ends bond strongly. more practices will make the band sound one/together. also if things are made more clear and audible it would be great.

enjoyed this track

falls over itself a bit i vot this 'cool' especially as it lurches  a bit and the recording is way down..........

keep on truckin........

fish

It sounds like y'all are at the beginning of the band journey

Learning to master your instruments, to listen, to train your critical ear, to play with others, to rock steady, to craft live music, to record it, to mix, etc. Keep on plugging away and lets hear the progress.

Playing you own tunes is encouraging, playing on stage 5 nights a week for a few years will help y'all hone your craft.

NC's brutally honest review.

Pro: guitar work is engaging

Con: Song isn't coherent- the parts don't match each other, the vocal part is repetitive, the singer needs practice, the drummer isn't confident and sounds like a beginner. Ditto bass.

Suggestions:
Practice
Cut the instrumental sections down.
Cut out the last heavy metal sounding bit.

well NCSeattle is wright , but do keep it up

cheers