| Change the ending |
Change the ending to generate more power in the vocals. Let her ad-lib some. Change that ending and you will have something. Great song.
Aww, loverly. The voice is beautiful.
Everything is very good. Lyrics, vocals, guitar, everything. It does have a abrupt ending. Overall, it great! 

Good song. Vocals, lyrics, guitar, everything. The end of the song does finish abruptly. But, overall it's great! 

Wow, me likey! She has a really powerfull voice... Overall composition is cool... Well done
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