the next one without lyrics,nearly every day i record a song,but the lyrics won't come

Nice beat.  Nice drum fills.  Needs vocals.  Lead works well with main body.  Nice alternative style rock
good progression but maybe a couple more different chords played in rapid fashion to the drum beat could
work.
You may want to try some panning too.
  - Mark FROM GRUNTLED

You have a good style, really enjoyable kinda post-punk rock, like blondie... which makes me think you should try to get a female singer to your music! I think that could be a good combination. Will definately get you a bunch of gigs $$$

i love ur style.. great beat and guitar with effects .. good job

wow...love it!

yeah get a female singer that would be really cool and would work well with your stuff!

this one is the best and catchiest of the lot

Überwältigendes Lied Ist Alles, das Sie Machen Müssen, Hinzufügt, dass Lyrik Und Das Lied Überraschen Würde

sounds very like blink182 to me, slowed down.....'all the small things', you not think?
its well recorded and played, did you do it all yourself?

hello kmeroddy
first of all i want to thank all of you for your Critiques,i'm very happy that you like my music
YES,it's handmade except the drums (samples)but all guitars & basses were played by me and the keyboards in other songs by my friend Daniel, recorded at our little studio

Great work.

Very Summer of 69 I thought...

Strap on a strong singer and make some folks happy with your music.
What's the singer from the Pretenders doing these days 

ike the music alot.....

Flyer


here it is

http://forum.bandamp.com/amp.html?xml=forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/6275.xml&webID=forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/6275.html

Yes very nice song needs a female singer.

This is the first review I've posted where I've agreed with three previous posters that the song needs a female singer. 

Yeah...

with a 'tude.

YOU RULE DUDE! Keep rocking!

This melody reminds me the year 1999, when blink came out...Really good structure, i'll be waiting for the lyrics, i know how hard it is. I have the same problem too...