Lyrics for this piece can be viewed on the lyric review board
This is a newer single on the same album as Bi-Polar Woman
I recorded this in my girlfriends livingroom and remixed it later
It is originally all acoustic but I added a few effects to it
What do you think      - Mark from GRUNTLED

wow, it is very different to the other one:

http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/3440.html?quote=1

the speaklines are a a resource to other members here too.

Maybe a couple of loops as drums or synths could help in this one

the lirics are like a poem, it has a good rhyme so, try to create an ambient to this one...

cheers again, I want to hear more of you eclectic stuff

Dodo

i think the transition from distorted guitar to acoustic is too sudden, maybe if you put delay on it, or fade it in and out it would sound smoother.
Strange song, experimental, do you know 'the fall'?