this is our first single that we recorded back in 2004.

lyrics for this song  in the lyrics review .  go check it out    

I see you can upload your first song.

The production is good, all the instruments and the vox sounds clear,

About the structure, hmm... is repetitive, i was waiting a sudden change but i always want to hear that.

The shades of the song do the part about the changes, are well thinked, is a great idea: a little bass slap, a synth line, the back voice, I like that

i read the lyrics too, are interesting.


Congratulations mark, welcome to the Amp

Dodo

there is something funny yet haunting about the subject matter.
i have no advice on how to improve this, its pretty together.
reminds me on 'love' the 70s band.

Interesting sound, very psychedelic. Dark red and blue colours.

The mix is interesting, very complete - bit heavy on the vocal effects, but this serves it's purpose.

I like this atmosphere. What did you use for drums? Sounds like an electronic kit, played manually?

We used some real cymbols and a very good drum kit played manually by my friend John Luczak.
He made up a rhythm from the original acoustic recording.  When I did this I did not play to a drum
beat but I kept my own time so we could add later.  This may be why it sounds unusual.  This was
intential!   It fits the mood of the song.

We entered this one in the battle for November.  If you like it please vote, thank you my fellow amp freaks.

 - Mark from GRUNTLED    

Cool song, it surrounds you

ivote

Rod

I kinda like this song. I can't really rightly say that I like it, but that's only for what it is. I never liked slow, sad, steady songs that much in the first place. But from what I've heard of that genre, I'd say this is pretty good. The only thing I have to point out, is that little twinkling sound, sounds kinda like wind chimes or a bell tree, I think you use that too much.
otherwise, that's pretty good.

Great, it's fine I think:) I like it:)