a song i made 2 weeks ago,all instruments except the drums were played  by myself,now i'm searching for the right lyrics that's why it is instrumental by now (sorry,my english is a little bit rusty)

its good, but i think the drums are a bit loud compared to the guitars, maybe crank up the guitar more, cos the drums seem to be running the show more than anything else, but then again if there were vocals the drums might fit better.

I agree completely with kmeroddy, you need to bring up that guitar and turn the drums down some.
If you are looking for lyrics, then I may have something to fit it if you are interested.
This is a good start though...... do not fret were all friends here  keep it up  - Mark Stoner from GRUNTLED

Nice powerful rock tune, I agree with the others about the mixing, I like the pumping bass line, could use some vocals though. Would love to hear this in a finished version, I like the repetitiveness about it, not many rock tunes benefit from repetitiveness. This one does though. I like the groove!

Great song, really groovable, gets you in the mood to do anything, will be even greater once the vocals are added.

pretty rock song.

would like to hear where it goes...

I'm really digin the i gues chorus riff it would be, maybe? Not the first one but the second one. it really grabs me. also, some killer slides, and good lead work. oh god that guitar solo is gushin man. kick ass. kind of makes me think of ACDC, but hopefully, when ever you put out a record your songs won't all be the exact same riff twelve times over, right? also i know how it can be to be the one playin all the parts by yourself, so i gotta give you some kudos for that. makes me realize that i have alot further to go, befor my mixes sound even that good. I can't wait to hear the vocals fo this.

good groove, big rock sound, eighties style
i was definitely singing something to this piece...
rock on!

Love it Schubbs

Dont know how I missed this..I think you should pick up the vox on your lead guitar..it sounds good...just bring it up a little..I think

A download for sure...see what happens 

Flyer

I like it too.There is some issues with the finger plucking guitar.Its falls out of timing at times,but again this might just be a work in progress.I also like your solo construction.Great job here..

Thanx to all
the timing thing sometimes happens,

sounds good keep it up