Here it is. I upload this song for 2ND time because 1st time it seems that was some mistake when i upload this song.  Song is about one little smile of one girl...I want to make another genre but I all ways turn to love songs...

Tell me what you think, like or don`t like this song, some suggestions, critics...

Bye!

there seems to be a timing delay in the lead guitar, and the simple construction could seriously use some vocals! especially since it's 4 minutes something, that's a bit too long for an instrumental if the backing doesn't change much.

but it's not bad at all, I like the arrangement, acoustic, bass, drum, fit well together. the soloing prevents it from getting too boring, even though the backing is repetitive. so there ya go! nothing wrong with a little love song, but try to get some vocals going!

this is definitely nice...

would love to hear vocals on this.

uuuuuh bg music is nice done but the lead guitar is out of sync and too nuch in front.

I agree, the lead guitar is out of sync, at about 00:42 and 01:07, then I didn't pay attention to that anymore. Just check it out.
It would be cool if you can put vocals to it, but then the lead guitar would have to be less, and I suppose you can move it a bit backwards too.

Besides that I like it alot. I've been roaming around looking for some nice rock stuff or nice love songs and this just might be one.

 

this time the uploading seems OK. great opportunities i see with this song.............the acoustic back up is good. i agree with everyone about the lead guitar being out. just fix that and it will sound complete. the ending is kinda crazy

The lead guitar only goes off tempo a few times in the song, but other than that the song is good.  When the solo gets going it is very good.  Pretty quick fingers!

Tnx for you critics, suggestions and other things...
When I listen this song, I realize that you all have right. The lead guitar is to loud.I fix that and now is much better. I don`t have right mic, to put some lyrics in my songs, and that the major reason because my songs don`t have a lyrics. And yes, some of them, would be much better with lyrics. I would try to put lyrics in this song, and I think that would be much much better with them.. I have some all ready...we will see...

Tnx again for all you suggestions...

Needs vocals I agree with other musicians.  It has potential  The lead works well with the other tracks
and it sounds like a good mix      -  Mark from GRUNTLED