#1October 5th, 2006 · 11:23 PM
122 threads / 121 songs
242 posts
United States
Rockets
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I was digging through my old music and discovered this song.

I wrote this two years ago for an english project where they told us to do a "stream of conciousness" poem in which we wrote random words on a peice of paper and linked them together through rhyme and rhythm.

I liked the sound of my poem so much that I wrote a song to it.

However this is a little out of time in places, and this is definatley not representative of the music I do today, still, not to shabby for random crap.

made in FL studio.

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#2October 6th, 2006 · 02:09 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
I like the psychedelic feel of this one, good structure as well. Well done.
The keys are too high so the drums are too far, bring em on, it'd be good to mend that  and it'll be great.
#3October 7th, 2006 · 05:56 AM
20 threads
313 posts
Malaysia
wow i like this one a lot! its almost sci-fi to me.....

i agree about the drums.

anyways glad u decided to make this..

download!
#4October 7th, 2006 · 06:42 AM
66 threads / 31 songs
2,314 posts
Netherlands
sounds like a good attempt at space rock I mean - - the mix is really quite raw, but the overall sensation is dead on! I like this style better than all-electronic better. This one comes close to some Legendary Pink Dots work, and Ozric Tentacles. Good thing you put it up here. I'll leave a nice rating!
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