#1September 25th, 2006 · 10:59 PM
6 threads / 6 songs
24 posts
United States of America
Go Away
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This song is not in a battle


I had go away from the keyboard for a bit. Here is me playing  guitar, one of these days I will get some software,

Hope you enjyoy!


Go Away

Forgotten in this world made of pain

And friendly sounds have all gone away

To taste the sting of cold bitter steel

And brush off the reasons we all feel

In darkness there is comfort indeed

For all of you my heart doesn't bleed

And save for me the fires below

I want to leave here I just want to go

I just want to go

Tonight I want to leave this scattered show

I just wana take a trip away

I just want to leave here today

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#2September 25th, 2006 · 11:24 PM
28 threads / 20 songs
255 posts
Australia
The song started and i liked what the guitar was playing and i liked the sound. Vocals were nice and the lyrics were good too. straight away noticed how Billy Corgan-ish the vocals were, even the lyrics were like Billy Corgan-ish.

Guitar solo was great.

Add some bass to give it a bit more oomph, that would be cool. You got a good quality recording here and its well played. I'll stay tuned for other songs from you!

Interested to see if i will hear some variety
#3September 26th, 2006 · 03:50 AM
6 threads
138 posts
India
this song i certainly enjoyed.....sounds great.

i would like to hear some drums and bass in the song that will make complete the small void when you go away from the initial guitar plucking.

great song 
#4September 28th, 2006 · 09:43 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
Finger Tapping is alive and well, pretty much same as the others except I feel alot of the lead could of been more........
#5November 20th, 2006 · 04:13 PM
8 threads / 8 songs
127 posts
Bulgaria
I like the melody and the strange sound of the guitar, but singing...not very much:)
#6November 20th, 2006 · 04:33 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
nice
this is a good recording..the sound was very clear and good...nice guitar..nice lyrics...maybe you want to kick up the vox just a tad on your next project...other then that, you did a good job with this .....

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