this is about a girl who lives in Texas.

the recording isnt bad at all..I heard it really good....cool song...I dont mind some country

Flyer

Need to work on the vox and the timing. Some of the sounds in there are cool- especially like the subdued guitar lead in the background in parts.

definately timing issues, and mix issues aswell. but I guess the concept is nice - some praise for that.

I'd say pan your guitar parts apart, tune them while your at it, and become more confident at singing, so you don't go out of tune when you hit the higher notes. And some more drive in the overly synthetic drum parts won't hurt either! Though I like how they sound - I think you'd prefer something sounding more realistic yourself, am I right?

good luck.

Definitely needs work on the timing and the vocals - but the construct of the song is fine, nothing out of the ordinary, but it works.
As PX says, the drums could be much improved regarding their sound, but they carry the song along fine.

I'd like this to be done more "tongue in cheek" as it were.  It could be a fun, corny, type of song, with a few twists to the vocals.

Sounds good.  As everyone else said the timing is off in some places.  But all in all its not bad at all.  Good job!

As some people have mentioned the timing is a little off and occasionally the vocals don't fit the chords that well but I like the lyrics and general song structure.

heehee....

nice one!

fix the timing a bit and its perfect!

Lol

I can really feel your mood in this song!

The whole song has quite an amusing tone, but it is still a pretty good song.

But the timing is out slightly in places.

I like disagree with people here, the voice is cool for this song timing is fine. either way very good song