#1September 23rd, 2006 · 02:25 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
27 posts
United States of America
My Texas Girl
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Please vote for this song !
Current votes: 6 (needs min. 15)
It’s in the battle 2006-10


this is about a girl who lives in Texas.

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#2September 25th, 2006 · 01:25 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
cool
the recording isnt bad at all..I heard it really good....cool song...I dont mind some country

Flyer
#3September 28th, 2006 · 10:10 AM
15 threads / 14 songs
140 posts
United Kingdom
Need to work on the vox and the timing. Some of the sounds in there are cool- especially like the subdued guitar lead in the background in parts.
#4October 1st, 2006 · 06:37 AM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,086 posts
Netherlands
definately timing issues, and mix issues aswell. but I guess the concept is nice - some praise for that.

I'd say pan your guitar parts apart, tune them while your at it, and become more confident at singing, so you don't go out of tune when you hit the higher notes. And some more drive in the overly synthetic drum parts won't hurt either! Though I like how they sound - I think you'd prefer something sounding more realistic yourself, am I right?

good luck.
#5October 7th, 2006 · 07:34 AM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
Definitely needs work on the timing and the vocals - but the construct of the song is fine, nothing out of the ordinary, but it works.
As PX says, the drums could be much improved regarding their sound, but they carry the song along fine.

I'd like this to be done more "tongue in cheek" as it were.  It could be a fun, corny, type of song, with a few twists to the vocals.

#6October 16th, 2006 · 08:27 PM
3 threads / 3 songs
24 posts
United States of America
Sounds good.  As everyone else said the timing is off in some places.  But all in all its not bad at all.  Good job!
#7October 23rd, 2006 · 05:05 PM
5 threads / 3 songs
17 posts
United Kingdom
As some people have mentioned the timing is a little off and occasionally the vocals don't fit the chords that well but I like the lyrics and general song structure.
#8October 24th, 2006 · 06:06 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
heehee....

nice one!

fix the timing a bit and its perfect!
#9October 26th, 2006 · 08:46 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
13 posts
United Kingdom
Lol

I can really feel your mood in this song!

The whole song has quite an amusing tone, but it is still a pretty good song.

But the timing is out slightly in places.
#10October 30th, 2006 · 08:24 PM
51 posts
United States of America
I like disagree with people here, the voice is cool for this song timing is fine. either way very good song
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