Here are the rumblings of a new one I started writing a couple of weeks ago.  This is a rough recording of us practicing last Monday through the pa.  I hope to write the rest of it tomorrow night.  Dan

Lo and behold the self made man
How he takes his stand

He's grounded in pride, as he walks away
So haughty in his stride

He's trying to find his way
He looks to compromise
Passing the gulls on the seaside
His pain,
he tries to wish it all away.

He's up and gone away.
Tell  me where have all?
Tell me where have all?
Tell me where have all?
Tell me where have all the Father's gone?

I like it, however the guitar riffs sound really familiar......plus this isnt finished so when the final version is up I'll rate and pick apart things.....

Thanks for the input.  Yeah ,style and guitar tone may be familiar but the riff and music is all me.  Trust me I have all their albums.  I will get it finished and post it then you can disect it.  Later

Who are you referencing to about your tone?

Got some nice vocals dude, sounds almost iron maideny, it's unfinished but definate potential, i guess theres no real point commoenting on production or anything like that because its unfinished but i like the concept

I agree with Devo here - almost iron maideny...mixed with guns n roses, maybe a bit of U2 in there somewhere.  It's an interesting mix of darker and lighter tones - take this one and run with it!

Great vocals with reverb too much.