Here is a slightly edited version of Cold. We did this song previously and made some small changes.

Beneath these crashing waves

I get the gist of things

.....and I hope and pray.

Oh, what if tomorrow brings......

.....in the impending sense that all is not well,

......exactly what, I can't tell...no I can't tell

Is this the same breeze that blew through your golden hair
with perfume scent of springtime air?

 Laura , please don't stop whispering to me!

Back the jib and reef the main........
.......don't forget you knew my name.

 Laura please.....don't stop whispering.

.......and when the sails begin to tear
 and when the sails begin to tear,
and the sails begin to tear.

Laura please don't stop whispering to me

My dearest Laura,
 there are a thousand words upon my tongue
 that I know that will never grace your ear.
My heart aches beyond what I can bear ,and what I fear beyond all other fears is to fade into the deep into a place without your voice.  Its so cold.....I am sorry......

......its just so cold.

You guys are great, I cant remember if I posted on the first version...going to see...Well I listened to the other one and this mix is alot better....all instruments are blended nicely now.


PS Are you going to do another version of Just Live?

Thanks for the feedback.  Yes, we going to do Just Live again.  I have never felt ever that it was finished.  I think you gave me the advice of having the chorus to 'hang your hat on".  Couldnt agree more.  Thanks for the input.  Take care, Dan

a very good song indeed. Drums are a bit in front imo.

...but I guess its supposed to be. Pretty well mixed, I'm impressed.

heard it for a second time. You are a great singer man.

For Rock its really good

Kimmee
and
Master Mike

For Rock its really good

Kimmee
and
Master Mike