My girlfriend wanted a song, so I wrote this for her.
Took me about 15 minutes to lay down everything, and probably another 15 to "master" it.
It's probably pretty apparent :-D

Dude, throw some vox on this. it's a nice vibe but it could use some melody IMO.

The fx on the guitar are a bit overpowering but they might sound cool on a vocal track, if mixed back a bit.

Good song..loads of potential here.  Yep - I agree it needs some vox, and the mixing needs to be redone (the lead guitar it too loud, and the drums sound like they haven't been eq'd)  I'd like to hear the final version of this! 

I miss the vocals. Kind of a standard radio song that works pretty well. I agree with the first reply; It certainly has got a vibe to it

At the beginning of the song I thought "oh no, here comes this riff again"...but as the song goes on you've actually done something pretty cool with it (around 0:25).  So for that well done on revamping an overused riff!!!!  Definatley has potential.  Agree with everyone above - get some vox in there!

... with or without you...

lovely song yeah. but how U2

and you give yourself away.... and you give yourself away...
and you give... and you give...
and you give yourself away....

@alerion
I agree, I wish I could sing!
I'll throw up a "un-effected" version

@Spoon/OtherSound
I have a lot to learn about music production, have any tips on how I should go about EQ'ing, compressing / etc?

@Tarsanith
It makes me happy to know that atleast someone likes / can stand the basic chord progression!

@Xeno
What can I say, I love U2 :-P

definitely has loads of potential....i seem to want to hear vocals in these. Do you have lyrics?

cuz i'd like to write...

work in progress ...............

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