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This is amazing.
Just Kidding.
So whatsup guys?

Nicely done...but it's all mixed quite loud...and I wouldn't mind if it was about 2-3 minutes longer 

who's guilty ?

This is my first attempt at software only based music.
I really dont know how to use fruity loops..
once I figure out how to increase the length of a song, I'll add more to it!

For a first attempt at Fruity Loops this isn't bad.  It's a difficult program to use, but potentially very rewarding.  Just keep playing with it and you will keep finding new features.  I agree with spoon that it's mixed quite loud, or maybe you saved to a low quality version..? 

Good job either way.

good melodies

It's not bad, but there's no catchy growth.