Whelp, I reworked this song, made it longer and took out some parts to reduce clutter.

This will be final version because I want to work on some new music.

Rock on!

Cool, I like it all except for that choking fax machine at the end lol.

I just realized I'm using those main powerchords too much lol... too bad, cuz i don't want to fix 'em or change 'em ... or turn 'em down 

Haha, maybe no cookies from pap yet, but I'm loving those effects on the guitar.  What effect you using to get that gated kinda sound?  I still dunno how to use that.  I think what would really add power to this is if you spent a little more time looking through the drums available.  Maybe in places more layers of audio too...but also keep in mind that that is comign from a guy who has about 25 instruments playing by the 1 minute mark in his FL songs haha.  Good job tho - if this is your first attempt its impressive!

The more the merrier!! 

Where do you hear the gated effect? i have like 3 or 4 different guitars in there... is it the " choking fax machine " ?

Dunno if gated is the right word, but I was hearing them at 0:47 in the first instance.  Anyone wanna correct my terminology?

That above comment was from me, but I have no idea why it posted as TessCrazy...never even seen her on here before.  Weird stuff that.

Yes exactly wat I asked for SWEET dude I love this

Hm, well now that i look at i had a minor slide on the guitar so it kinda slid up and down in certain points... is that what you were hearing? Idk i tweaked that guitar so much idk what it is anymore    its a completely different one than the main chorder.

who said i wouldent give him a cookie? i like this! now for some vox i think a couple of reapeated phrazes in there would be awsome something real smple to sort of throw you off of the chords every now and then..this way you wont have to really worry about the chords being used to much so long as you have something real simple to break em up!


now, for my cookies

you get one cookie for the effets (because they are truley wonderfull)

AND you get a SECOND cookie because of the fact that you are so new to all of this and your first few tries have blown all my tries out of the water

so cookies for you

-the doll you know and love bcause she has the sweets

papy pap

Mega-techno sounds, really well pieced together.
The actual structure of the music is really simple - but it stays interesting because of all the variations.
It's not a style of music that I'd generally listen to, so you deserve a pat on the back for the fact I thought it was too short!!!
Good stuff

i made this alot longer a couple months ago, it was originally rock, then morphed slowly into a techno beast... maybe if i finish it and post you will see what i mean...

this version very cool 2