ok, one more from that 6 year old demo. the best thing to do with our guitarist then was to just let him play, so I wrote this middle part to an otherwise very mellow song - in the proto-version I used a sample from 'Come Together', so go figure...

hope you like the 70's. enjoy!

lyrics:

I want this sweet fruit to flower
I want to drain this cup dry
Drink it up till the very last drop
Get your steamy hot head spinning
Don't stop till your out there dreamless
Weightless motionless meaningless
Should we call it bliss?

Can't you see that I am you?
That there is no longer two?

I think these horses need riding
I think they know where to go
Fearlessly fly on the wings that they seem to grow
Let the bodies flow
Don't let go till you're out there dreamless
Weightless motionless meaningless
Should we call it bliss?

Can't you feel that you are me?
That you don't need eyes to see?

Music is very good. Lyrics seem good to me. But I would practice the vocals a bit or the song should be sung by another singer

Agree With TritonKeyboarder on vox comment.....

But the music is Good..... Professional recording quality too.....

i Like this

 

love the middle part, but not so keen on the vox too

great sound! great playing!

This has a nice feeling to it.
It also has a BIG retro feel to it.  I'm thinking Caravan, mid to late 70s UK band.

Good stuff.  The recording is excellent.

I love this trak............. the vocs and guitar solo (though its a bit long)especially hang chords

all i can say

gets my vote
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