okey so I am sort of stuck with Cm, so here is yet another composition in that key. ( I will explore others soon, promise...).

This composition came yesterday and I continued it today.
I dubbed it "Bulldog in the Caddy".

hope you like it. Enjoy.

I honestly was about to stop listening at 30 sec. until the drums came and change my opinion... at about one minute there does however need to be a change in the main melody and it is a bit dare I say noodly and at 1:45 wth happen the drums just stopped try a fade and ONCE again I was about to stop listening until 2:15 and yeah the drums were back however so guitar would be nice just to break up how repititive the piano is I will have to give this a 60% and welcome to B.A. u'll get there

drums are a cool pattern

Gets repetative, a melody change would be nice.