Fixed with 'case's suggestions w8 for the solo to judge its the best part of the song

I miss a clear line of theme. Some base too, can not hear, maybe in there but not hearable here. Futuristic piece I think.

the rhythm doesnt fit the guitar in the first half. bit naive. but a nice try

"Futuristic piece I think."

Just ahead of your time.

If you ask me, ROCK ON!!! Liked the solo section, but there was a bit of phasing like TK says in the first part, little time issues. I got the main joust of the song and i liked it!

drums and guitar...............

well thats about it

whats missing?

splas the fish

I dont like this super-distorted guitar. I do think it just doesnt suit our decade.

0:54 - This is just not right. Maybe fun to play but my brain is gonna implode after 4 more measures of this simplicity

1:22 - at least the guitar matches the drums a little more

And you were right:
The Solo actually is a lot of fun and very nice and by far the best part of your song.

Nice for the beginning. I guess you've got the right feeling and groove and i'm waiting for the next project.