#1August 31st, 2006 · 07:59 PM
17 threads / 16 songs
148 posts
United States of America
Your Little Room 2

This song is not in a battle

Here is a clean Protools version of this song. I originally wrote it on the way to a gig last week and recorded it on Audacity in my laptop. The sound was not spectacular to say the least. i re-recorded it with the fixes suggested by spoon, battlecat and Tritonkeyboarder (but i've got no strings!). Anyway, this version is actually listenable and almost complete. It's a lullaby for a friend's baby, born last week. whaddya say TK, you wanna throw some strings on this?

Here are the words again

Your Little Room

Close your eyes and I'll hold you near
and we'll rest in your little room
as the stars and the planets rise
you are my world
and I, your moon

Go to sleep in my arms and dream
Though your dreams are a mystery
do you dream of a different world
or dream of home
or dream of me?

Close your eyes for the night is here
And in your room there is just us two
In my arms I can feel you breathe
And every breath
I breathe with you

Now I know there will come a time
When our world in this room will end
But for now as I hold your hand
I'm all you need
You're all I am
My little man

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#2August 31st, 2006 · 08:29 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
145 posts
United States of America
It put me to sleep, in a good way

Congratulations to your friend!
#3August 31st, 2006 · 08:56 PM
92 threads / 12 songs
893 posts
United States of America
Beautiful! Even better! love the song.....
#4August 31st, 2006 · 10:10 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Very nice.....Paul Simon feel to it.That guitar line sounds familiar and fresh at the same time,weird
#5September 1st, 2006 · 04:47 AM
6 threads
138 posts
dude love it. like the guitar playing......soothing.
#6September 1st, 2006 · 07:10 AM
8 threads / 8 songs
37 posts
Croatia (Hrvatska)
This song is very emotional, lyrics are great, and you voice are perfectly fit to the song. You have great voice...and for guitar part, (I `m also guitarist), guitar playing is great, all in all the song is great....
#7September 1st, 2006 · 12:21 PM
92 threads / 12 songs
893 posts
United States of America
hey, I just realized I've been humming the verse of this song all morning while I'm at work. It occurs to me that others might be doing the same. Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't that a pretty good measure of potential marketability? Just wondering......
#8September 1st, 2006 · 12:36 PM
24 threads
319 posts
wow this is so good! I can really picture this big...
#9September 1st, 2006 · 12:40 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
15 posts
Very good indeed!
ten points!
#10September 2nd, 2006 · 04:19 PM
188 threads / 27 songs
2,825 posts
Hey alerion,

strings were only a taste of thought. I do love this version very much and I think this gorgeous tune doesnt need any other instruments. You did a great job.
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