Here is a clean Protools version of this song. I originally wrote it on the way to a gig last week and recorded it on Audacity in my laptop. The sound was not spectacular to say the least. i re-recorded it with the fixes suggested by spoon, battlecat and Tritonkeyboarder (but i've got no strings!). Anyway, this version is actually listenable and almost complete. It's a lullaby for a friend's baby, born last week. whaddya say TK, you wanna throw some strings on this?

Here are the words again

Your Little Room

Close your eyes and I'll hold you near
and we'll rest in your little room
as the stars and the planets rise
you are my world
and I, your moon

Go to sleep in my arms and dream
Though your dreams are a mystery
do you dream of a different world
or dream of home
or dream of me?

Close your eyes for the night is here
And in your room there is just us two
In my arms I can feel you breathe
And every breath
I breathe with you

Now I know there will come a time
When our world in this room will end
But for now as I hold your hand
I'm all you need
You're all I am
My little man

It put me to sleep, in a good way

Congratulations to your friend!

Beautiful! Even better! love the song.....

Very nice.....Paul Simon feel to it.That guitar line sounds familiar and fresh at the same time,weird

dude love it. like the guitar playing......soothing.

This song is very emotional, lyrics are great, and you voice are perfectly fit to the song. You have great voice...and for guitar part, (I `m also guitarist), guitar playing is great, all in all the song is great....

hey, I just realized I've been humming the verse of this song all morning while I'm at work. It occurs to me that others might be doing the same. Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't that a pretty good measure of potential marketability? Just wondering......

wow this is so good! I can really picture this big...

ten points!

Hey alerion,

strings were only a taste of thought. I do love this version very much and I think this gorgeous tune doesnt need any other instruments. You did a great job.