I like it...yep - fatten that bass a little bit more...lower the high frequencies on the synths...I like how that female vox is used sparingly...

Only other thing is that I think it's too short - if you want'em to dance - you've gotta give'em at least 5 minutes of this....

Not bad. Build up at the beginning is very good. I think there are some EQing issues on the final mix but I didn't find the 'high synths' particularly offensive. Some nice interplay at times between the diferent melodies- at other times they got a little confused IMO.
Overall- nice sound; needs some work; should definitely be longer.
Should turn out to be a fruitful experiment.

This is a FL experiment, right?  Well there's been a ton of FruityLoops stuff on here fairly recently, and I have to say that this is one song that actually makes it sound fresh again.
 Well, done.  I enjoyed it

It took me a sec to like it but I take it u did this in FL

Nice,
Sky...

(I LIKE TECHNO)

Ha, yeah.

Techno rocks

Techno is so sweet. And your's sounds good.
But come on, man. I think it's wrong that you immiediately reject the idea of a sax in this song. This is an expirement, right? So how is it an experiment if you stay within the already well-defined lines of music?

You've got a seriously groovy tune going on here, but as a slightly educated music listener, I can tell you that there's nothing you can't do with this; turn it into classical, heavy metal, or throw in some sax if you want.  Just let your ideas run wild.

i had a general focus, although it was an experiment i had an idea of where i wanted to end up. But yes, I'm sure i could find a way to get some sax in here. But... why? lol techno sax!!! haha new genre baby!

Well, maybe i'll try it in a new song, this one is gonna be retired because im sick of hearing it, but yeah, i could *try* some sax techno... *laughs*

That concept just makes me laugh... maybe i'll try it for kicks and giggles

-Luke 

5 minutes of those synths.... i thought the last 20 seconds of them was too much 

Thx. Maybe if i am bored on a rainy day.

I like some of the techno that's out there makes me want to go to a rave or something. getting all sweaty from dancing for 2 hrs.  this is pretty cool stuff maybe some mix/ levels could be tweaked and give it a better ending.  I hear alot of this kinda stuff out there.
this is pretty good.

Ahh,  you're gonna make a lot of money one day.

  You think so?

     

uber cool!

yes, techno rocks!

apparently so do you.

This is cool...

   I could see this behind some high speed video shots....  

           Bring em on... Get busy makin more music dude!

                               Jimk

Love it!
Nice sounds
Good Quality
The kick could have had a bit more thump or wmff or what ever,
but I'm only saying that because I can.

After listening to it a few times I've come to the conclusion that you could have even turned up the tempo and freaked out completely with the synths somewhere along the line, taking your listeners to some orgasmic like NooNoo land. Seriously.

I like it a lot

NooNoo land... well i might have to make a new song called noonoo land now... aha thanks for the feedback.