I'm not really sure about the genre of this music. My initial goal, however, was to make a psychodelic rock type of song.

I hope you like it.

don't you just love samples? I love samples...

um... nice organ sound there... haunting... creeping... hum okay, some guitar plucking in there, kindof soothing...

you know... if you could do a voice over to this.. maybe heavily effected vocals, telling a spooky story or something, or perhaps an ancient poem... then this could be really awesome. Right now, I enjoy what you did, how the organ and the guitars play together, and the mystic atmosphere of the samples, but it's a lot of guess work what this track could be about... I mean, maybe a rhythm to give it cohesion and a bass (synth) while you're at it... that would be very cool.

so, good start for something...

sounds like various windchimes in the intro..cool...if you want this to be more of the psychadelic rock variety..then try adding some driving drums behind the whole thing...remove the long breaks of watery sounds..and add some campy vocals 

As it stands now...I like it as an ambient piece.

ambient music is so cool and i really love your soundscape , keep at it ,a story evolves thru sound ...cool 

I agree with Spoon. It's very interesting,but it's not finnished. The organ must stay alittle longer, maybe you have to put in some vocals or...I don't know. This is anly an idea. You decide The natural sounds are great Remind me a lot of things...Thank you

I think this more of a rlaxing song    then A Phycodelic rock song...i think this is good....easy to listen to

Flyer

Setting the mood wonderfully, I love how you ease into the song instead of starting right away with the music, it suits the piece well, I would love to see you work it more, like a couple of ideas mentioned by the other guys, but it's up to you...

What a really 'wet' song, scuse the pun

In some strange way I fully agree with spoon, and 'driving drum beat' are the right words, I can nearly physically feel the need for them.

It's the beautiful organ and guitar riffs, they have a haunting simplicity

lol. this reminds me half of floyds breakfast, and jonny greenwoods body song. Its cool, but i dont think the organ should have cut out at 1.20. just keep with the music.

Ian