Singing random things in the shower getting ready for work...
Decided to quickly see if they fit with any of my recent instrumentals...
Decided to quickly record one take...
Fiddled around with it for a bit...
Got late for work...
Eventually called in and said I had to babysit.
Oh dear. Smacked bum for me.
Like most of my other stuff, it doesn't have a 'structure' really...and it doesn't really make sense. But oh well.

LYRICS

What if I said it with a different inflection?
Would it make a difference to your reaction?
What if I sang it in a song?
Would you choose to hear it wrong again?

What if I wrote it on a post-it?
Or tatooed it to my head?
Would you get the message?
Or would you still be playing dead?
Even if I had a plane to
Write it in the sky,
There wouldn't be enough space,
To list all the reasons why...
I've fallen, I've fallen...
I've fallen, fallen...
I've fallen.

I am red, green and blue,
Head over heels in love with you,
And if I don't have you soon,
I'll expload.

I love the lyrics though I am not the one who pays attention on lyrics but in this case....

well well I really enjoy this one, the lyrics are very well constructed. Actually they strongly remind me of a poem I once read somewhere... but I can't recall who wrote it, nor the excact content of it.

I think they're really very well done - the lyrics

and I particulary like the repeating end-chorus bit going almost like a children's rhyme. brilliant. sets a great chemistry yeah. would love to hear this loud in a smoke n strobe filled club sometime

the rest yeah... is porcelaindoll-ish. very much your scripture of song writing/production.

Personally I dont really care for the music( its done well but not for me).......however I will listen to ANYTHING with your vocals on it.

Nice little song!

I'd like to hear "wrong" sung on the same note as "song" then drop low again for "again"...just an idea.

Like Puppet said..the repetition of the chorus at the end is very effective.  Maybe I'd like to hear the drums and bass a little louder and driving through the last chorus...maybe build each chorus louder and louder so that the last one is a great big crescendo of sounds. Good job!  Hope you don't get into too much trouble at work! 

if I don't make the strangest songs here on the amp, then it must be You !

i tried listening a song of you  every now and then, i never could decide what to say about them, its not that i didnt like them
just like today...

but you did well making this one anyway,

i think

i enjoyed listening it twice

very nice, but the music doesn't yet live up to the seduction of the voice -

how about some double tempo fat percussion of some sort on 'explode' ?

just (another) idea

 

cool, chilled. You seem to have fallen quite a lot of times!

Yeh, you have a nice voice, very cute. The music is quite relaxing, something i could listen to in a smoky club, or just lying down on my bed.

Love the harmony at the end. I'm a sucker for vocal harmonies!

Whats this whats this?? Haha... My boyfriend is a wrestler, he'll come over there and kick his yanky arse.
lol. Just kiddling.
Oh, and paperdoll, I would love to live in your closet, I'll scare all the monsters away


No, not lots of times. Just twice I think...Or still in the process of falling the second time.
I like my Greg so very much. I don't think he likes me as much as I like him, but still, I'm not bothered as long as we get to hang out. 

ok porcelain u get better all the time
this is trippy..............and very nice
o.k. song construction........????
consider the hook .................... is it strong enuf?
ask yourself why would I listen 2 this a second time?
I listened 2 this loads ............... the hook is there 'am i red and green and blue'
but it arrives really late in the song........... where the sythn arps around near the start might be a good place to put it
to hook me use the bait early!!!!!'am i red and green and blue'

got my vote

splash the fish

yay! you can live in my closet! hehe, slthough this means i have to get rid of the little dolls in there... they get kinda grouchy when i put people in there, they ted to bite sometimes their horrible little creatures when they get cranky so  iwill move them out and put them in my dresser draw instead, i think they'll like it bette rin there any ways

Well this is really good. its the 1st of your songs ive listend to, but ill give more a go. cant be all helpy helpy, except to say that you are very good at what you do. you should make more like this one,well done.

i don't like the vocals of this anymore.
someone help me with some more lyrics?

i dont think it really needs anymore lyrics, its succinct as it is.

it's really very good. you may not be with the one this was aimed at anymore but as a generic love song it's , awesome, basically. I say keep it the way it is.