ok i know the singing aint great but it sounded like the song needed vocals to fatten it up. think the song still dont sound right any suggestions on improving it??

The vocals are far off in the background enough that they don't count as vocals... more as an instrument. . but I would have pulled them out (dropped them) sooner.. then let the newer effected vox come back in with the change in the music, And then scoot back the 1st vox into the mix so that one isn't aware that they returned.

The change to the quieter part is good. I would drop the vox to more become background or out completely at that point.

I like this song. I like the melodies. I like the mixture and dropping and returning of things.

Nice and laidback... What was this recorded on? Everything seems so adjusted to high freqs. Did you do that or was that an effect of the machine or process? It doesn't hurt it... I am just aware of something high-pitched about it.

I really like this overall...yeh - the vox aren't great...I could almost hear you dropping in a female opera singer sample in this...mixed in the back so it sounds more like an instrument...Nice job! 

thanks all... i do really like the song except the vocal type part..if anyone gets time to add new lyrics ...would be great!!! lol