Indonesian Lyrics...feel free to your opinions...

This is perfect for sitting back having my  morning  coffee and reading the paper. Nice, I like the vibe.If possible could you post an English translation of the lyrics? As it keeps going I'm really loving that guitar. Good work. (rough spot at 2:58, 3:22)


PS. Instead of a fade why not end it on a sustained note after that little bass/ guitar run that pops its head in there every once in a while

excellent instrumentation...

my only critique would be that the voice doesn't seems to be "part of the song" until arround 1:30.  Maybe is just something about the mix.

Nice realxing mood... kind of bossa feel. Like it.

Very well recorded.

honestly, I don't care much for the first 40 seconds, but after that less is definitely more: nice laid back tune with good vox and brilliant guitar. thumbs up!

I disagree about the first 40 seconds - I really like it!  The initial voice needs to be double tracked to match the other vocals I think, it may also not be processed in the same way as the other vox, and this could be why it doesn't seem to fit as well.

Apart from that - this is one really good song.

ha..my gfriend doesnt believe this is actually indonesian!she thinks your just making it up! i dont though, and its nice and catchy, well done.put some more up.

May i speak up a little.... This Song, Really is....

Mr.Rayz's Song.

I'm a little bit shocked at the first time i listened to this....

coz hey, somebody named Hex just uploaded this song and changed the title....!

without both of me and Mr.Rayz knowing it!!

But that's no big deal..... thanks anyway for uploading this song here in bandamp.

The original title is "Ku Tak Sanggup" and yes this is Indonesian.

Mr. Rayz is a member here in bandamp (ID : RAYZ) . He composed the lyrics and he sang the tunes

himself.

The one you should blame on for the lack of mixing quality and poor guitar playing would

be : ME    

coz i played all the music and mixed 'em down.

That's my version of Clarification.

Mr.Rayz..... do you have something to say about this song?

huahh....my bad..my bad...

i put this song on my computer at my office, but i was very very "slumpy" so my friend put this song on bandamp without my notice...

   

i want to tell u guys lil bit bout this song...

me and Mr. Ancient wrote this song...at the first time, Mr. Ancient gave me this cool instrument tracks that he made himself, so that maybe i can make sumthing from that track...and we did...

yes, i wrote the lyrics....but it would be nothing without the amazing guitar skill from Mr. Ancient...

so...give a standing applause for  mr. Ancient!!!! 

BRAVO!!!!     

Ku Tak Sanggup                              -  I can't handle

Terkadang ku merasa                     - Sometimes i feel
Lelah dalam hidupku                       - tired in my life
Langkahku pun terasa                    - my steps feel so
Berat dan berliku jalanku                - heavy and the road is trumbling

Problema yang selalu                      -  problems that always
Terjadi tak membuat ku gentar       -  happens doesn't n make me crumble
Aku tak perduli                                -  i don't care
Semua tak berarti                           -  It's all meaningless

Disaat kuingat dirimu                      -  When i think of you
Yang selalu ada                              -  Who's always there
Dihatiku dan                                   -   In my heart and
Kusadari kusangat                         -  i realize that i really
Membutuhkan dirimu                      -  need you

Kusadari ku tak sanggup               -  i realize that i can't handle
Ku tak sanggup                              -  i can't handle
Hidup dalam sunyi sepi                  -  living in the loneliness
tanpa dirimu                                   - without you
ada disisiku                                    - by my side
Kusadari ku tak sanggup                -  i realize that i can't handle
Ku tak sanggup                              -  i can't handle
Melewati badai hidup                     -  go through the storm of life
tanpa dirimu                                   -  without you
sungguh Ku tak sanggup               -  i really can't handle it

Problema yang selalu                      -  problems that always
Terjadi tak membuat ku gentar       -  happens doesn't n make me crumble
Aku tak perduli                                -  i don't care
Semua tak berarti                           -  It's all meaningless

Disaat kuingat dirimu                      -  When i think of you
Yang selalu ada                              -  Who's always there
Dihatiku dan                                   -   In my heart and
Kusadari kusangat                         -  i realize that i really
Membutuhkan dirimu                      -  need you

Kusadari ku tak sanggup               -  i realize that i can't handle
Ku tak sanggup                              -  i can't handle
Hidup dalam sunyi sepi                  -  living in the loneliness
tanpa dirimu                                   - without you
ada disisiku                                    - by my side
Kusadari ku tak sanggup                -  i realize that i can't handle
Ku tak sanggup                              -  i can't handle
Melewati badai hidup                     -  go through the storm of life
tanpa dirimu                                   -  without you
sungguh Ku tak sanggup               -  i really can't handle it

makes much more sense now. strange that the lyrics are so angsty, but the singing sounds quite happy.

Bukan soal kamu dan aku berbeda    -    It's not about the differences between me and u
Kita sama satu sebagai manusia        -   We're the same one, as a human
Hidup di dalam cinta                           -   Living full of love
Lewati semua rintangan                     -   Get through all the barriers
Menuju bahagia                                  -    Into happiness

waah this is good!

ummm...karen banget!! lol. Nice to hear something closer to home... 


cool song, awesome lyrics.

n i agree that the ending could be a bit better than just fading.

i like this song very much - but i'd rather it say "AncientWong - Ku Tak Sanggup" or "Rayz - Ku Tak Sanggup" (which ever one of you wants to claim it) since you are the composer. any chance ya'll could host it for us? =) thankya much

Thanks for the comments guys......

Me and Mr.Rayz are inside one same group,a duo group.

in Bandamp, we use different ID, but in the outside world.... we collaborate.

so since this song's belongs to the group, i think neither me nor Mr.Rayz

could claim this song as our individual's posession.





 

really calm chorus singing, warm and rich textured with lots of flavour. a short vacation.