This song is about a struggle if anything, namely the struggle i had trying to get my new recording software to work (adobe audition if anyone can offer some advice)

Anyway its the first one i managed to get recorded. It was off the cuff really

If you dont like it id appreciate some constructive criticism

Thanks for having a listen

Too short, I want to hear more. Very mellow and peaceful.

Thats nice!
Made me feel sad

Beautiful!!!!

Nice piece, i agree with theodore, make it longer... Fill it out. Spot on!!!

Keep working on the software, and don't be afraid to push your limits.

I really love your sound... 2 bad it's not longer song, feels kinda good...sad, ya But good! I like it. I have adobe audition, if u need crack or something...let me know. What you could do is really make song that has begining and end, chorus and verse. With this sound, that would be beautiful. Keep rockin' and good luck!

Very nice and peaceful. I would love to hear something a little longer.  Your going to do very well in the future here if you keep it up!

man this is realllly nice
you actually captured what it is to play music, not make some lame statement

peace, the surf, making love.

I love the innocence! Nice melody. Keep at it.

Beautiful song.

Thanks everyone for your criticism and praise. I promise the next one to be longer, and perhaps a little less saddening, perhaps!! i cant promise lol

Very relaxing.  Makes me feel like leaving work early and going on a hike.

Fantastic in every way except there isn't enough of it mate, well done and a half!