#1August 23rd, 2006 · 07:00 PM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
Under A Willow Tree

This song is not in a battle

I am back at home with my beautiful bed and my pal FL!
Its all a bit up in the air, but I think I am ok for now...

I dropped my handbag in dog poo the other day whilst I was kissing my boyfriend under a pretty willow tree.
Poo ruins everything!

I've only been with him a few weeks. He's pretty darn awesome and yummy.

I think the hi-hat or whatever its called stands out too much and needs variation, but I only noticed this after I'd converted it all to mp3, darn. Will sort that out when I put vocals in and stuff.

I have the start of the lyrics, and its nothing to do with poo or willow trees :

If I liked you a little less,
And if I was a little less like me,
It would be easy to undress,
It would happen perfectly.

I can't remember the rest, its written down somewhere! Don't know when I'll get chance to record it but meh. Enjoy.

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#2August 23rd, 2006 · 11:52 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
Im glad your ok
I like the hi Hat  I think it sounds good...nice recording also
#3August 24th, 2006 · 01:34 AM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,086 posts
yeah that sound is a bit too present, but the ambient instrumentals are very nice... good construction. those lyrics seem promising... looking forward to the complete version.

yehh... good to have you back!!
#4August 24th, 2006 · 02:36 PM
188 threads / 27 songs
2,825 posts
I enjoyed this tune and that you're back and ok. Please do some vocals to this!!!!!!
#5August 24th, 2006 · 04:26 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
15 posts
Hi there, some comments
Really good recording! Congrats!

The sound is really good, interesting. But:maybe you could try to do more variation in it?

I like it, very clear guitar chords, combined with the voice it becomes sort of mystique!

Sounds good!
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