Vers

Don't try to be perfect, be happy instead
and don't try to be everything, you're just one piece
one piece of millions others, living around the world
you can't be all those millions, be happy instead

Don't try to reach the moon, without a spaceship
and don't try to fly, your arms are not wings
you are not a bird, but just as lovley as one
but you can't reach the galaxy, without a spaceship

Chorus

And you
want to be
someone else

yes, you want to be
the king of the earth
the queen of the sea

You want
to see your self
as the perfect human

But I
can tell you that's
not worth a try

Vers

Don't try to succeed alone, when it's a mission for two
and don't try to run away, from your simple life
just accept your life, and live right now
don't try to build your world, when it's a mission for two

Don't try managed things, which causes you pain
and don't try to be the one, who does it all
just be yourself and you will, be so much happier
don't try to cover wounds, that causes you pain

Chorus

And you
want to be
someone else

But you can never be
the king of the earth
or the queen of the sea

And you want
to see yourself
as the perfect human

And yes,
you can
you just have to realize,
who you are

Dude, seriously I hear so much potential with your stuff. Better recording,accompanying band and Blam there ya got it.I enjoy your voice and your songs but  they are empty without the rest of a band. This post is meant to get your ass in gear not to insult

I agree with Basket...I hear alot of potential in your music also... I Think your at the begining of recording your own music..I might be wrong.....But, I think your on the right track... It does take time...there are alot of good musicians on Bandamp. I'am sure you could find some who would collaborate with you. Maybe a bass player, or whatever you other instruments you would like to have your music accompanied with...if thats your intention....but whatever the case. Continue what your doing...like I said.. I Think your on the right track...

Ralph_Flyer

nice voice, good song!
would have liked more warmth in the recording, but yeah, would have liked a complete band and a big van too

hope you'll do the instruments and post again!

still a good vote

Tune the axe and I think it will sound better

man totally agree with the guys. really encourage you to get in a band, will sound awesome with the drums, bass and a lead guitar solo. must agree great potential

Dude...you need a band!! Your vox sound good, steady guitar playing...like everyone says..drums and bass would really fill this out! 

agreed.....the song has great potential....I would love to hear it filled out some.....More instruments, even some vocal harmonies...I think this could be a winner.

Detta är nog den bästa låten du har gjort efter "here to pick you up" och haha fan killen du är ju grym! dude you ruuule! take care (L)
/achillea