Maybe some change in pace a bit, some chord strumming or something. It gets boring after a while.
Passionate and "molding"...Very difficult to listen without visual.. Good work anyway: Exotic.
Very, very nice. My only criticism is that its a bit long for something with no obvious recognisable theme or melody. Either make it shorter or come up with a melody that you could keep returning to every now and then to give it structure. Good work tho - love the tone of the arpegiating part.
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could come up a lot. I wanted to hear it more, but I had no place to go with the volume. Needs a hook I can take home with me. Beautiful, but could have a bit more structure, if that makes sense...
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journeygirl wrote…
could come up a lot. I wanted to hear it more, but I had no place to go with the volume. Needs a hook I can take home with me. Beautiful, but could have a bit more structure, if that makes sense...
Please don't think I am picking on you, I only quoted the last one, as I can't do multiple quotes well, I've tried, it's a pain.. This is directed at alot of the post's here...
I am confused, This isn't pop, so, you aint gunna get the "hook"... I mean, this is exactly what this is meant to be... this is fabulous classical work... The volume is actually pretty good, it is befitting the title.. just loud enough to be heard, but almost fading out... as the sun at dusk is just enough to be seen, as it fades out to darkness.... This is phenominal...
It is what I would love to be able to do... but, unfortunately, all I can do is make a bunch of silly crap... I could learn from him... and for a home recording, the quality is phenominal, it is sooo difficult to record acoustic guitars well... Bravo, Jsoldi... You have a fan in me..
Jim K
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somebody gotta listen to this song at the dusk, while looking by the window or something. You don't need to see the sun at the horizon, actually, it would be better if you don't see it, because that's not the part of the dusk I'm trying to express here. The thing is that when I hear it while I'm looking by the window at the dusk, I feel a magical similarity between the music and that kind of absence of time and emptiness the dusk make me feel. Just try it, to see if I'm hallucinating or what...
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